Saturday, November 27, 2010

Somehow I felt this odd sort of Déjà vu when I wrote this..

Creamy white
Unlined
Untouched
Thick parchment

Fallen tears
Smudged
Flawed
Blotted imperfection

Sheer frustration
Scrunched
Crumpled
Discarded thoughts

3 comments:

Johnny Twoquill said...

you ought to title it 'Ode to Rushil's blog' :)The imagery is very, very strong. That and the insinuation. What about fleshing it out into a short story?

Sonakshi said...

There's no insinuation.
Look at the date, I started writing it before I knew about your blog! :P
I've never tried my hand at short stories.. Maybe I'll give it a shot. :)

eB said...
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